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Rise of the Legendary Emperor
by don_offl
Rise of the Legendary Emperor 2: https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-the-legendary-emperor-2_19876873706750605Revenge is a dish that tastes best when served cold but can a single man take revenge on a powerful kingdom?Do you like it when a hero kills an arrogant young master but spares or falls in love if the arrogant one turns out to be a young miss?Do you like it when the mc collects beauties like trophies on every arc rather than working towards his goal?Do you like it if the MC has to save…
The Goddess' Champion
by Photosphere
The world of Sandoria suffers in silence; with the reign of the tyrant God Lucius finished under the might of the Demon Emperor, Hero and Witch Queen... a new Goddess is chosen to take over this deranged world... but, she is not respected or accepted by her citizen.In a sad world where love no longer exists, opulent ladies are criticised for being too slow and inefficient due to their 'bounciness', and handsome men are rejected for being 'too pretty for the battlefield'; The Goddess sighs and lo…
Beauty and her Beast:The Don's obsession
by Empressking
（Warning:Mature content,Raffaele is heavily obsessed with our little bella）Beauty they say is in the eyes of the beholder. Everybody desires beauty and love it. What if it becomes a curse. Bellarosa（Beautiful rose）Romano is the daughter of the cook of the powerful mafia Vincenti family. She has been cared for and looked after since young by the Vincenti family when their eldest son and Don of the family decides to take up her and her mother's responsibility. Bella has always been scared of the …
Horror stories collection
by Skaystha
it's a collection of all horror stories and thriller stories I came across name and location may be changed but stories are still same. Hope you enjoy it.Note I am not a native English person so if you find mistake i hope you will tell me to correct it not criticise it.
Reborn as Miyamura with a system
by Svneighter
After the death of Tenjo Yuuta the only thing he hoped to get reincarnated into an anime world with a reliable system. And he does get reincarnated in the world of Horimiya with a system which was slightly different yet fully reliable for the mc.Due to his good deeds God asked for any one wish he wants and the god was surprised that instead of op powers and skill he actually asked for...A/n : This is my first fan fic novel so please be gentle when you criticise. There will be plot holes but I wi…
A Guy in Cultivation World with A System
by Daoistj7ZjTg
HI,it I Author this is my first time working so feel free to criticise me .This work of mine is written on the base of what will I do if this happens to me.
Original Poems
by Live_A_Legemd
Some Poems/Short Stories I will write on my free time. It'll mostly be poems. Any type of poem. You might like them, you might not. Criticise if I do anything wrong. I might use a title out of the comments to name some poems.
Hassling Transmigration
by Sonnetica
Miya is a highschool senior who’s about to finish highschool. One of his hobby is reading novels online and he had read countless of them from masterpieces to the mediocre ones.As time pass by he gets pickier with what he chooses to read and criticise them alot. That’s when fate played a prank and Miya is transmigrated into a novel he mildly even remembers about. It was probably a novel that he criticised once. But with his carefree attitude he decided to just go along with the flow.Will his var…
Blissful memories
by What_the_fuck
Isn't nostalgia just the greatest?You feel these warm and comfortable feelings in your body the moment you see something vaguely familiar that shaped your childhood with mirth. But what happened to the dark past chained and creeping behind it?Will you accept the dreadful past or will you stay willfully ignorant?Will you finally accept the good and bad brought along with it?(my first novel, please criticise me so I could be better with my writing.Alos yes there is yandere)…
The journey after my death
by Random_Slayer
After dying because of a girl, Simon started his journey through another world discovering the origins of his parents, revealing the truth behind their deaths, and trying to make his new life worth itP.S this is my first novel so don't expect too much and just enjoy the ride, also criticise me as much as you can to help me improve
The One Who Kills Time
by KaltInThought
Entertainment mediums tend to showcase life as fun and exciting filled with meaningful bonds between people. However, our reality is a sad disappointment, especially in the eyes of Laz who goes about his daily life criticising everything and everyone including himself. If you are here for an action-packed thriller or an emotional romance story, you are in the wrong place.This story is nothing more than the day in the life of an average and "boring" student.
Gangster Squad
by Ari_Santos_5887
My first story, so I’ll make many mistakes along the way lol. So feel free to criticise or give me advice enjoy amigos. This is story of how a innocent student later became one of the biggest gangsters to ever exist. Later creating one of the biggest, richest Mafia organisation to exist.
MY REFLECTION
by Otu_Harriet
Gisella, tagged as cursed, criticised by everyone because she lost her mother during her birth and maltreated by her stepmother. Was born with an unknown power to predict and foresee the unseen and the future of others. Due to this, she grew up timid and discriminated by people. It took great loss of lives , the near ending of her dignity and the one she loves most before she realized her inner self ( her reflection).After realizing the reason of her existence and her inner being, she stoop to c…
Fixing the Plot:New
by king245x
Cole Ashtol your typical novelist dies and is chosen by a god who criticises his novel telling him that it was good but didn't get the ending it deserved because he had lost all morale to complete itHe gives him a chance to fix his mess and create a novel with a perfect endingfollow Cole and his trusty system as they fix the world of his trashy novel But unknown to him,his transmigration wasn't only because of that
A Vision Of Redemption
by Wanderyng0Scrybe
Welcome to the world of Neveros, a world which was once a haven of technology and aether. A place where the heaven's powers and the Machineries of mortal men worked in sacred union and synchrony. A tale of the downfall of civilisation, redemption and realisation.Immerse yourself in the story of Alexys Huron, a once slave turned war machine and discover how he regained his true mind and heart and made his mind to redeem the world.Now, all that's left is that whether he'll go down in history as a …
Aganks
by NULL_MONARCH
A boy of age of 16, smart and I. Q of 130 who is bored with his live. Always reading fan fiction, novel, manga, ANIME, examine all scenario if he transmigrated/reincarnated in ANIME then he reincarnated in real life with custom made system with three wishes then what going to happen..... He get his life like that he like or fate changes his life~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~[A. N NOTE - I am a new writer with inspired novel ( with other fan fiction) writing for fun and for self satisfaction] Engl…
Always and ForEver
by adamnasx
Henry is without a doubt one of the luckiest children in the entire world. Because he comes from a renowned and prosperous family, his loved ones will undoubtedly provide him with everything his heart could ever want or need. Even his marriage to Sera, who was the daughter of his father's closest friend and confidant, was prearranged.Even though he previously had many years of bliss, his luck abruptly ran out when he became 12 years old. He began to experience a series of bad luck that seemed to…
the adventures of a lost soul
by pro_gamer_2545
I'm new to this platform I've never wrote a story before I had to use all my brain cells to get that 1 chapter out I thought it would be a good idea so I follow what happens in the spoilers I am hoping to publish a total of 50 chapters and if I get 100 votes or something I will carry on righting I want to be criticised so I can make my my novel better for youquick heads up I'm only 13 so what I Wright wont be fantastic I don't even know what I should do it as a 1st person so your seeing it throu…
[{QT}] Nine-Tailed Celestial Fox Finding His Mate
by Jack_Reaper_6408
Ayrton, In Upper Realm Is The Great Elder Of Nine-Tailed Celestial Fox Clan And In The Lower Realm He is the Sole Ruler Of Utopia. Ayrton Has Been Trying To Find His Soulmate For Millions Of Years But He Still Couldn't find Her. But In These Million Of Years He Did Become Cold, Ruthless and Cruel. He Was In Just Blink Of Madness.But Suddenly He Is Given The Opportunity By The System. That He Will Be Available To meet His Soulmate. But In Return He Has To Return This Favour To Creator. Without An…